Wednesday, August 26, 2009

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legs wing into flight
an unbearable angle
startled snowbird
falls



HN
8/25


[wingstroke, v. nabokov]

14 comments:

  1. Very nice - I like both the imagery and the form which echoes it.

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  2. Dear Karen,
    This form seemed appropriate. Thank you
    for letting me know your thoughts on this poem.


    Marie

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  3. Finally, another one. I was going to leave a phone message, "Where be the haiku, Marie?" ... x

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  4. Dear Clarity,

    Thank you for the smile on this warm
    summer night.


    Marie

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  5. here it is:

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gXt1LdgSPGA
    Sometimes having another window with a video on it can block sound.

    I must confess, I debated this, felt like a piece of self, out there...

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  6. Dear Clarity,

    I just listened to you heartfelt reading
    of ee cummings poem. Excellent.

    M.

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  7. A very beautiful image indeed. Many thanks.

    Greetings from London.

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  8. Dear CIL,

    Thank you for the kind compliment. I enjoyed
    your blog and will return to learn more about
    London.


    Marie

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  9. Thank you Carma, come again dear.

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  10. Dear Dave, thank you for the brave. M.

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  11. Hello there again, Manview,

    You are very generous. Thank you.


    M.

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