Monday, May 11, 2009

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thorns prick her throat
mouth spills red roses
first wife mourns alone



HN

8 comments:

  1. Leaf corkscrews
    down to rest, water's
    skin kisses her

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  2. the
    kindness
    of
    strangers
    goes
    down
    like
    sweetwater.

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  3. Beautiful Haiku. Your work is always is always on point.

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  4. you are too sweet shell.
    and your blog is a joy.

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  5. This is a lovely haiku - it's so difficult to get so much meaning into so few words!

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  6. pinkerbell, you're a dream.

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  7. your work is so pretty, this is my favorite!
    cherrs from mexico!

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  8. Dear Estrella,

    How sweet of you. Thank you.

    M.

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