legs wing into flight
an unbearable angle
startled snowbird
falls
HN
8/25
[wingstroke, v. nabokov]
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- Marie
- Haikuist. Plain, contemplative. All haiku is the property of C. Marie Do not use any haiku without my knowledge or permission.
Very nice - I like both the imagery and the form which echoes it.
ReplyDeleteDear Karen,
ReplyDeleteThis form seemed appropriate. Thank you
for letting me know your thoughts on this poem.
Marie
Finally, another one. I was going to leave a phone message, "Where be the haiku, Marie?" ... x
ReplyDeleteDear Clarity,
ReplyDeleteThank you for the smile on this warm
summer night.
Marie
here it is:
ReplyDeletehttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gXt1LdgSPGA
Sometimes having another window with a video on it can block sound.
I must confess, I debated this, felt like a piece of self, out there...
Dear Clarity,
ReplyDeleteI just listened to you heartfelt reading
of ee cummings poem. Excellent.
M.
A very beautiful image indeed. Many thanks.
ReplyDeleteGreetings from London.
Dear CIL,
ReplyDeleteThank you for the kind compliment. I enjoyed
your blog and will return to learn more about
London.
Marie
very clever :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Carma, come again dear.
ReplyDeleteBrave - but I like it!
ReplyDeleteDear Dave, thank you for the brave. M.
ReplyDeleteVery sensuous.....
ReplyDeleteHello there again, Manview,
ReplyDeleteYou are very generous. Thank you.
M.